Thursday, August 14, 2008

The Milk-Soft Call

Usually, when I'm engaged in coversation ... or just sitting quietly with my own thoughts ... the words come together, clickety-clack ... well, usually with these pauses which have been a lifelong presence in my speech pattern ... but, otherwise, with virtually no effort at all.

But there are times that it takes some searching.

Like the time that I became acutely aware of a dove's call. Oh, I had heard doves many times before, had savored the softness of their calls. But this time, for some reason ... or perhaps no reason at all ... I wanted to find the words to describe what it was really like.

I remember searching ... for the precise words ... the ones which would help me to preserve that particular moment ... words which would help me to "say the unsayable" ... about that distinct sound floating to my ears ... carrying a certain air of mystery about it.

It's so unlike other bird calls, so soothing, so ... well, so milk-soft.

That's it! I decided that's the term I've been looking for, and I walked on into the woods, hoping I would remember to try putting it in a poem someday.

The result:

THE MILK-SOFT CALL

I pause where

tall swaying trees

verge the meadow,

billowing their

thick green

clouds of leaves,

for a stirring

liquid breeze

has carried to me

the milk-soft call

of a dove,

and I am seized

for that moment

in an amber block

of tranquility.

© 1997

(originally published in Midwest Poetry Review)

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Today's word: tranquility

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Your words and the way they follow each other, are wonderful...and, well, milksoft.  I love the doves' calls.  I liked your cloud of leaves...all your words and expressions in this poem are beautiful to every sense that they cover in the mind...and actually, to the ears and eyes.