I grew up far from the ocean ... any ocean ... so the one time that I got to walk on a real ocean beach was ... to put it mildly ... a most memorable occasion.
Oh, I had glimpsed the ocean at the movies ... in books or magazines ... but never the real thing.
I think I was most impressed, when a face-to-face meeting finally came, with the immensity of it ... its power ... its beauty ... its music.
I tried to get some of that music in this little poem:
BEACH MUSIC
Waves come tumbling
onto the docile shore,
flinging foamy fingers
across the ochre plane.
Teeming with bubbles,
they search and settle,
soothingly diminuendo,
on a healing chord.
Eliciting a sigh
from pliant, sandy keys,
the fingers slide off
into the lap of the sea,
where joyous whitecaps
merrily urge them,
jostle and encourage them
to play it all again.
©
1998(originally published in Capper's, now back for an encore appearance with one of my little watercolors)
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Today's word:
joyousAfterthoughts ... in response to your comments:
Thank you, Helen, for that kind comment.
Sort of a "luck of the draw" today, Kelly, but I'm glad you liked the combination ... and "this little jaunt."
2 comments:
Well done!
Yeay, one of your paintings! The poem and the painting convey the movement of the ocean so well :) Thank you for this little jaunt back to my favorite rocky coasts...
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