Today's poem is another example of the kind of subject I write most frequently about ... an ordinary, everyday event or topic ... but perhaps seen in a slightly different way ... as though with "new eyes."
I try to impart that difference ... and I'm greatly rewarded when a reader sees that difference ... or perhaps points out something about the topic that I hadn't quite seen myself.
It's all about the learning process ... and I love it!
The photo? That's me ... somewhere in my teen years ... standing between the grandparents who reared me. The original was rescued by one of my relatives ... passed along to me ... and is now one of my most prized possessions.
The poem:
WINTER GLOW
Cracked, yellowed snapshots
surrender from inside
a musty box
circled with twine, speaking
of times gone, like thin
ribbons of vapor
slowly curling and uncurling
from a neighbor's
chimney
while I sit in this cold
attic space looking
at relatives
and places I never knew,
their images saved,
but stories lost,
beginning to sense a feeling
of warmth, a winter
glow, spreading
over me as I touch the faces
of these strangers again
and close the box.
© 2006
(published in the January, 2006 issue of Capper's)
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Today's word:
warmthAfterthoughts ...in response to your comments:
Thank you, Helen, for dropping by ... and leaving that generously kind comment. I do find a kinship with old photos ... whether of known family members ... or members I will never be able to identify ... or even those who just may have joined the collection because they were of family friends. And now I see that I have some catching up ... a lot of catching up to do ... on comments posted here on "Chosen Words." I do appreciate them, one and all, and I apologize for falling behind ... again ... on acknowledging them. Patience, please, patience ...
1 comment:
For starters...I see which one you take after...an old phrase.
The one thing I grabbed when I left right before Hurricane Andrew was the big plastic box of photos...some old and some old-old. I have no idea who many of them were, but I like them. Some--when I look at them know we fit into the same family. Your poem was wonderful...the wording and construction, and especially the meaning.
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