Still another poem about writing, another piece of evidence attesting to my quest ... not to present myself as an expert on the subject ... I'm not ... but to come nearer to an understanding of the mystery of writing.
And it is a mystery.
I often sit down to write a random thought or two, but I seldom know where this is going to lead. I almost never know the ending when I begin. That reveals itself as I permit myself to be led by the words ... "these hungry words," if you will.
Indeed, I like to let them sit at the table of my understanding, and I listen carefully to what they have to say.
Speaking of listening, try reading this one aloud ... no audience required ... simply read it to yourself again. I think it's a poem that begs to be read aloud ... or at least given another silent reading, but with an ear to the repeated sounds.
I liked the sound of it when it first offered itself to me. I liked it through several revisions. I hope you'll find something in it to like now:
LET THEM ROLLICK
Please don't let these
words just lie there,
losing their body warmth
to an indifference
that deepens like dust.
Let them roam the range
of your experience,
wander the gentle slopes
of meaning, become
attuned to music that
echoes from your past,
let them have rein
to gallop toward sense.
Please let these hungry
words sit at the table
of your understanding,
let them traverse
your tongue, gather
speed and light, and
rollick, really rollick.
©
2002(originally published in Capper's)
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Today's word:
rollick(P.S. - Another installment of "Squiggles and Giggles" has been posted and ... if you have a moment or two ... there's a link on the left)
2 comments:
Hey Mr. Brimm,
I saw your poem and your picture of some flowers and it made me think of my trip to Home Depot today. I went to Home Depot and I saw a pot of Daisies I liked and I thought of my favorite movie "You've Got Mail" with Tom Hanks and I bought the Daisies. I love going there and looking at the flowers and enjoying the sunshine while I'm there. How about sharing that little bit of news in your Squiggles & Giggles and ask your readers what they like about going shopping.
I do want to thank you for the poem I really liked it. Have a great afternoon Mr. Brimm and take care.
(I forgot to tell you I am changing ISPs soon...my S&G contact email won't work after today. Please use this one in the meantime and I will let you know the new one soon.)
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