Saturday, June 13, 2009

Autumn Night



Perhaps these images, written about so wistfully, have little meaning to others, but to me they are the essence of things I miss about that place where I grew up.

I think it is quite natural that we have this connection with our beginnings, and quite natural that we should think of them again ... and again ... as we look back and see just how far we've traveled in all these years.

Thank goodness for that "bridge of memories." I often go strolling across it.

The poem:


AUTUMN NIGHT


Stars spilled
across dark velvet,
thin ribbon of smoke
climbing the air,
lettuce-crisp, clear,
toward a lemon moon,
square of window
whispering its light
through the trees,
beckoning to me,
wanderer still,
with only a bridge
of memories
to carry me back.
© 1996
(originally published in Explorer)

Today's word: wanderer
Afterthoughts ... in response to your comments:
Well, thank you, Helen! When something I've written gets a reaction like that, I know I'm on the right track.
Thank you, Hannah, for that awesome comment.

2 comments:

Helen in FL said...

What a picture you created and just with words...amazing!

hannahthemaid said...

this was an awesome write.