This little poem is laced with memories.
It began, as many of my poems have, when I was observing other people.
This time I was riding the bus. Sitting near the front, on one of those side-facing bench seats, was a young mother who was chewing gum and entertaining her infant daughter by blowing bubbles.
Watching them, I was reminded of an incident long ago ... I may have been three, or younger, certainly in my pre-school years ... of being seated outdoors in a tub of warm water ... summertime ... bright sunshine.
I still have a distinct memory of a bubble my mother made from that sudsy water, how the bubble glistened in the sunlight. How fragile it was. How magical.
The poem was written, eventually published, and put away. But the memory lingered.
Then, I was out walking with Phyllis in a nearby park, looked up at the fluffy clouds lazing in the sunshine, and noticed the lights near the pavilion ... how like bubbles they seemed to me, as they glistened in the sunlight.
How like that bubble of so many years ago.
The poem:
BUBBLE
My mother's
hand descended
into sudsy water,
a delicate circle
of forefinger, thumb
slowly emerging,
soft lips breathing
life into a bubble
I still see, quivering,
shimmering, a miracle
unmatched in all
of my three years,
and all of these
searching years
since then.
©
1998(originally published in PKA's Advocate)
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Today's word:
shimmeringAfterthoughts ... in response to your comments:
Thank you, Hechan, for that beautiful, shimmering comment. I'm always delighted, of course, when somebody likes the poem ... but when they notice the illustration, too ... well, that's icing on the cake.
1 comment:
You do hit lovely, loving memories. The picture is exquisite. You do have an artits's eye!
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