Thursday, October 8, 2009

Running the Hurdles





Today's poem, I think, cries out for more poetic detail ... and more detail would call for more than its eight short lines could deliver.


The poem may, in fact, have been considerably longer when it was first written ... but I was under the mistaken impression that 
Capper's only published eight-line poems.


See? I can be brief.


The poem:


RUNNING THE HURDLES


Have you
ever noticed
how many more
things go wrong
when you're trying
to get away
early, or make up
for lost time?
© 1997

Today's word: hurdles

1 comment:

hannahthemaid said...

so true.
great thoughts.