Today's poem is another example of the kind of subject I write about most frequently ... an ordinary, everyday event or topic ... but perhaps seen in a slightly different way ... as though with "new eyes."
I try to impart that difference ... and I'm greatly rewarded when a reader sees that difference ... or perhaps points out something about the topic that I hadn't quite seen myself.
It's all about the learning process ... and I love it!
The photo? That's me ... somewhere in my teen years ... standing between the grandparents who reared me.
The original was rescued by one of my relatives ... passed along to me ... and is now one of my most prized possessions.
The poem:
WINTER GLOW
Cracked, yellowed snapshots
surrender from inside
a musty box
circled with twine, speaking
of times gone, like thin
ribbons of vapor
slowly curling and uncurling
from a neighbor's
chimney
while I sit in this cold
attic space looking
at relatives
and places I never knew,
their images saved,
but stories lost,
beginning to sense a feeling
of warmth, a winter
glow, spreading
over me as I touch the faces
of these strangers again
and close the box.
© 2006
(originally published in Capper's)
Today's word: warmth
of these strangers again
and close the box.
© 2006
(originally published in Capper's)
Today's word: warmth
Afterthoughts ... in response to your comments:
And thank you, This and That, for those kind words about the photo ... and the poem.
1 comment:
Thank you for sharing such a lovely photo of wonderful memories and loved ones! The poem is very touching, too.
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