Monday, December 22, 2008

Running the Hurdles

(No, this is not a hurdle - but I'm intrigued by shadows, and I thought I'd share this one today)

Today's poem, I think, cries out for more poetic detail ... and more detail would call for more than its eight short lines could deliver.


The poem may, in fact, have been longer when it was first written ... but I was under the mistaken impression that Capper's only published eight-line poems.


See? I can be brief.


The poem:


RUNNING THE HURDLES


Have you
ever noticed
how many more
things go wrong
when you're trying
to get away
early, or make up
for lost time?
© 1997

Today's word: hurdles

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