Wednesday, October 22, 2008

The Moon Tonight




I grew up in the country ... not on a farm, but in the country ... away from city lights.



As a result of that ... and hearing my gandfather talk so many times about the phases of the moon ... its importance in the planting of crops ... knowing about its pull on those distant oceans ... its effect on young lovers ... I was always intrigued by the moon.


The front porch swing provided a great vantage point for watching the giant harvest moon rising slowly over the hills.


I remember being so intrigued by the quarter moon ... the new moon ... the moon showing in the late daytime sky.


When one lives in the city, though, the moon can become a forgotten item ... unless it really asserts itself as we're coming up the driveway on a late-winter evening.


Then there's no denying it. I still remember that evening ... can almost hear a choir, singing a cappella, celebrating the rising of that moon.


The poem:


THE MOON TONIGHT



What a gorgeous sight,
lodged in the darkness
of the walnut tree,
the nearer maples joining
to hold it, glowing
in the late-winter sky,
broken, and yet whole,
like a stained-glass
window catching evening
light, holding it high
under the ceiling while
voices rise in song.
© 2004


(originally published in Capper's)

Today's word: a cappella

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

I do like this poem and...as always...it brings up a picture, to an extent, different for everyone who reads it. I loved the wording of the moon "lodged in the darkness of a walnut tree." I love the way your words and ideas all fall and stay together. The scene of you watching the moon from your porch swing, somtimes with your grandfather is a great one and a good thought for a painting, if you could see in it what you were looking out...no best as a poem. Your Chosen Words are always a great addition to the poem.

Anonymous said...

Thank you, Helen in FL, for that early comment ... as I often say, so much depends on what the reader brings to the poem ... understanding, perspective, experience, thoughtfulness ... and I enjoy seeing my poem reflected in the mirror of the reader's thoughts.

This and That said...

Is that a Barnes and Noble in the far distance :)

This is a lovely poem. I hope you are having a good week!

Anonymous said...

Could be ... that just could be a Barnes and Noble in the distance, Colorado Lady. Glad you liked the poem, and I'm having ... well, yes, I'm having a good week ... thank you very much. Hope you are, too.