Saturday, October 11, 2008

Bouncy Pine



Things I say, particularly in those pieces which may eventually become poems, are not always intended to be taken literally.

That's the case today, of course.

Anybody who has ever looked even casually at a pine tree, knows it doesn't have springs, concealed or otherwise.

But it doesn't take much observation to lead one to the thought that it looks like there must be some kind of mechanism at work there.

There have been times when I've been in the company of pine trees, unaware of a slight stirring of air, but there is movement in their needled branches.

How else explain that movement?

It seemed to be the way to describe them at the time. The moral of the story ... the "lesson" ... the "mini-sermon" ... seemed to follow naturally.

It's a thought, at least ... and I use it sometimes to cheer myself up.

Here's the poem:

BOUNCY PINE

The boughs of the pine
ride on concealed springs,
rising and falling
at the slightest touch
of a summer breeze.


Oh, that we could be
as resilient, as quick
with our enthusiasm.
© 1996

(originally published in Explorer)
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Today's word: concealed

2 comments:

MyMaracas said...

I'm glad to see you're continuing to blog. I was afraid you might give it up when AOL Journals closed. I would have missed you!

I'll change the linking url on my sidebar today.

Unknown said...

Thank you, mymaracas, for those kind words. As you may have gathered, I'm still exploring this new place in which I've landed.