Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Bouncy Pine

Things I say, particularly in those pieces which may eventually become poems, are not always intended to be taken literally.

That's the case today, of course.

Anybody who has ever looked even casually at a pine tree, knows it doesn't have springs, concealed or otherwise.

But it doesn't take much observation to lead one to the thought that it looks like there must be some kind of mechanism at work there.

There have been times when I've been in the company of pine trees, unaware of a slight stirring of air, but there is movement in their needled branches.

How else explain that movement?

It seemed to be the way to describe them at the time. The moral of the story ... the "lesson" ... the "mini-sermon" ... seemed to follow naturally.

It's a thought, at least ... and I use it sometimes to cheer myself up.

Here's the poem:

BOUNCY PINE

The boughs of the pine

ride on concealed springs,

rising and falling

at the slightest touch

of a summer breeze.

Oh, that we could be

as resilient, as quick

with our enthusiasm.

© 1996

(originally published in Explorer)

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Today's word: concealed

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

There's a large Ponderosa Pine outside my front door.  Your poem describes the way it moves, wonderfully :)

Anonymous said...

I love the "sound" of pines.  We lived in a pine grove once and I'll always wish to hear that constant sound again.