Here's what I said about "I Shall Write" when I originally posted it on "Chosen Words":
I usually make my postings in the morning, but today was a bit different.
I had to make a medical pit stop - nothing serious, a quick tire change and I was right back into the race. But I didn't pop a wheelie and head directly back to the keyboard.
It was such a beautiful day that I frittered much of it away on an outdoors walk which included a pause in the shade to do a couple of quick sketches.
But here I am now, rather glad that I delayed today's posting. When I finally meandered back home, I found the mail waiting. I don't often get good news in the mail, but today was an exception.
Waiting in the box was a copy of ICON literary magazine, containing two ... count 'em, TWO ... of my poems. I'd like to share one of them with you now. It's nothing spectacular, but I do like the sound of it, as I did just before I sent it off to seek its fortune early this year.
I had hopes, but I've learned not to bank too heavily on those.
It's another poem about writing ... about the determination to continue writing. I still have that, thank you very much, and I'm glad I do. It helps to keep me going between those pit stops.
The poem:
I SHALL WRITE
When all light has settled
into a darkness that steals
the sustenance of birdsong,
when day is a mere flickering
across the screens of minds,
when paper has retreated
into the corridors of memory,
I shall approach the blue
smoothness of water, and lie
there beside it; savoring
its wavering coolness, I shall
write upon it as someone else
may have done before words
began making poetry, before
there was music, before
love and understanding
tried to live among us.
© 2006
(Published in the Spring 2006 - 40th Anniversary Edition - of ICON literary magazine)
Today's word: determination
Afterthoughts ... in response to your comments:
Oh, I'm fine, Monae ... thank you very much. I'm still writing, still doing some sketching and painting, taking a daily walk ... and what a pleasant surprise it was to find your comment today! I hope things are going well for you ... and I hope to pay a visit to your blog very soon. Best wishes. Take care. See ya.
And thank you, Hannah, for those kind words. Best wishes to you, too.
3 comments:
words so beautiful
congratulations.
Hello Mr. Brimm,
How are you ? I don't know if you remember me but I always enjoyed your poetry and I have been looking for you online but I just now found you. I have missed your poetry so very much and I hope to get to read some in the coming days. I am here ----> http://deardiary-monae.blogspot.com/ . I can't wait to hear how you are doing. Do take care Mr. Brimm
Monae
Hello again Mr. Brimm,
I went walking today and I thought of your word : determination
I could use some of that right about now. I have to keep walking and I do need some determination.
Thanks again
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