I grew up far from the ocean ... any ocean ... so the one time that I got to walk on a real ocean beach was ... to put it mildly ... a most memorable occasion.
Oh, I had glimpsed the ocean at the movies ... in books or magazines ... but never the real thing.
I think I was most impressed, when a face-to-face meeting finally came, with the immensity of it ... its power ... its beauty ... its music.
I tried to get some of that music in this little poem:
BEACH MUSIC
Waves come tumbling
onto the docile shore,
flinging foamy fingers
across the ochre plane.
Teeming with bubbles,
they search and settle,
soothingly diminuendo,
on a healing chord.
Eliciting a sigh
from pliant, sandy keys,
the fingers slide off
into the lap of the sea,
where joyous whitecaps
merrily urge them,
jostle and encourage them
to play it all again.
©
1998(originally published in Capper's, now back for an encore appearance with one of my little watercolors)
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Today's word:
joyousAfterthoughts ... in response to your comments:
Thank you, Helen, for that kind comment.
Sort of a "luck of the draw" today, Kelly, but I'm glad you liked the combination ... and "this little jaunt."

Well done!
ReplyDeleteYeay, one of your paintings! The poem and the painting convey the movement of the ocean so well :) Thank you for this little jaunt back to my favorite rocky coasts...
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