Sunday, March 2, 2008

The Beauty of It

It's a little early for summer re-runs, but I guess today's entry would fit that category. Here's part of what I said when I originally posted "The Beauty of It":


This commentary is not so much about the poem as about me.

The poem, if not on the first reading, then on the second, reveals itself. My poems, after all, display their meaning fairly near the surface.

But the poem came to me again as I was thinking about something which has been on my mind these past several months.

The poem was lurking nearby yesterday, a long, long day which began amid the trimmings of medical science ... the lights, instruments, glowing screens, careful, attentive, caring medical practitioners.

The day ended with an evening spent watching a "Pink Panther" movie. I needed a few laughs.

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I was telling readers that I was a cancer patient, that I had been undergoing treatment for several months, and there were other treatments remaining. But the prognosis was good.

I didn't spread the word initially because I found it difficult to talk about ... I knew people would have questions ... and I wasn't prepared for that.

Finally, my intuition told me that I needn't keep guarding this as a "secret." There was no need to keep the facts any longer from friends, from visitors to this page ...

And now, I have some other news to share: My oncologist, at my recent annual visit, released me from treatment. What a great, wonderful, welcome surprise that was.

With many thanks for readers' comments ... which helped to keep me going all those busy months ... sustained me ... and with special thanks to Phyllis, who was with me every step of the way, here's the poem:

THE BEAUTY OF IT

The beauty of intuition

is that you dont have to analyze,

hypothesize, or otherwise

do anything about it:

You may just sit quietly

and let it come to you,

unfolding like a tightly-wound

rosebud transforming itself,

wafting about while you

breathe in an understanding,

an answer to the question

you hadn't even asked.

© 2003

(originally published in Poem; now part of a manuscript in search of a publisher)


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Today's word: intuition

Afterthoughts ... in response to your comments:

Thank you, Featheredpines, for those good wishes ... and I remember those Bugs Bunny cartoon adventures, too.

Thank you, Marti. I couldn't have said it better myself: "how wonderful to have hope and how wonder-filled life is ... "

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Indeed, what wonderful news!  I'm very happy for you :)

It's been many years since I watched Pink Panther cartoons, but they were my favorite - along with Bugs Bunny.  How cartoons have changed since then.

Your poem describes intuition perfectly.

Anonymous said...

this is beautiful
and I am so happy for your news.
how wonderful to have hope
and how wonder-filled life is....
Marti