First the photo. I had a new camera. Who hasn't fiddled with a new toy, trying to figure out how it works, without all the bother of reading a lot of boring, technical stuff?
I knew it had some kind of gizmo that would allow me to take my own picture, or appear in the photo with others, if I chose. But I wasn't exactly sure how it worked.
I pushed a few buttons and set the camera on a nearby shelf. I waited. I waited and waited. Nothing seemed to be happening. I decided to take a look to see what was wrong. At that instant, I heard a tiny z-z-z-z-zip, and I was recorded for posterity.
Blurred, but recorded.
The poem, I think, cries out for more poetic detail ... and more detail would call for more than its eight short lines could deliver.
The poem may, in fact, have been longer when it was first written ... but I was under the mistaken impression that Capper's only published eight-line poems.
So there you have it, two mistakes coming together to make today's entry:
RUNNING THE HURDLES
Have you
ever noticed
how many more
things go wrong
when you're trying
to get away
early, or make up
for lost time?
©
1997***
Today's word:
gizmoAfterthoughts ... in response to your comments:
Thank you, Indigo. I'm glad you liked the combo today. You may have noticed, also, that I'm a little behind schedule with my responses to readers' comments ... I'm still "running the hurdles" ... between thunderstorms ... computer problems ... and a few other complications. But I am still going ... and I hope to get caught up again ... one of these days.
1 comment:
Both elements worked well together here. Sometimes simple says more than alot.
I thought the poem said so much eloquently within a few passages. (Hugs) Indigo
Post a Comment